5Word Challenge - The Yard Man

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i feel like i've walked into the middle of an interesting novel. and i'd love to read more.

only one typo:

he was not *use* to rating -> used

i especially liked "He remembered that Carson had arrived at their rendezvous point dressed like a Muhjadine and smelling of hashish, cardamon and goat."

you do a great job of creating compelling characters and writing a compelling plot.

[this is good]
Awesome...Me Too! This is an outstanding bit of a novel! :)
Thank you Amanda and thanks also for the heads up on my spotty proof reading.
John
Thank you Wavecritter,
I don't know about "awesome" but I appreciate your approval of my 5 word post.
John
you're welcome :)
[this is good]
[this is good]

I really enjoyed it! :) And awesome suits it I think, though now I would like to know... "The rest of the story"... LOL :)

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